Feedback and Improvements to my Article

I managed to gain some feedback on my double page spread and article. These are some of the comments i received...

What went well-

1. Good tone and good use of vocab to set your target audience.
2. Article is suitable for age range of audience.
3. Article is informative to the reader.

To Improve-

1. Make an anecdote- a personal, funny story for the interviewee to share with the audience, to make the interview more exclusive.
2. Make some of the responses more detailed, as this is what the reader would want.
3. Perhaps change the title, improve on the font and come up with an exciting heading.

This is the double page spread now...